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fanfic: Fear (part 2) - athene — LiveJournal
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fanfic: Fear (part 2)
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telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: June 12th, 2010 09:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
OMG, that was terrifying! Hallucinating!violent!Ryan is terrifying!

And the giant spiders... *shudders*

But I like that, even though the ending was pretty fluffy, it's not just all magically fixed. Connor having admitted he was scared of Ryan, there's going to be some work needed before everything's fine again :)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: June 12th, 2010 09:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks. I really wanted to try something different, and I know Munchkin likes a bit of dark horror-type fic, so figured I'd give it a go with this. I still don't think it's as dark and scary as I wanted it to be, but that kind of reaction is good because it means I was doing *something* right, at least *grin*. And much as I love fluffy snuggly C/R fic, I also occasionally like to play with the fact that Ryan is a highly trained soldier and is probably very capable of scary acts of violence when necessary.

It's partly Fi's fault the ending went so fluffy, but I did want there to be a lighter moment at the end after all that angst and pain. Still, that's not something they're going to get over in a day.
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