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fanfic: Fools and Heroes - athene
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fanfic: Fools and Heroes

written for the Primeval 100 challenge - Fools Rush In

Title: Fools and Heroes
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Characters: Abby, Connor
Rating: 12             
Warnings: character dying
Spoilers: none
Challenge: Fools Rush In
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.

 

 

            One, two, three, four, five. Abby stopped the chest compressions and tried again to breathe life into Connor’s lungs.

            Dammit, Connor, why didn’t you wait? Why did you just go charging in like some stupid bloody white knight?

            One, two, three, four, five. Breathe, you idiot, breathe.

            A short distance away the children huddled together, coughing and crying. At least some of them had been saved from the building where the anomaly was spewing noxious Precambrian atmosphere into their world.  

            One, two, three, four, five.

            Why, Connor? Haven’t you ever heard of the saying ‘fools rush in’?

            Fools, and heroes.

 

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lukadreaming From: lukadreaming Date: January 14th, 2009 09:19 pm (UTC) (Link)
Erk! *Iz worried*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 14th, 2009 09:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
I was dithering for ages what to put in the warning, since technically he's not dead yet. So I opted for 'character dying' instead of 'character death'. I think that covers it *evil grin*
missyvortexdv From: missyvortexdv Date: January 14th, 2009 09:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
Noooo!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 14th, 2009 09:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
He's not dead yet. There's still time for the others to turn up and save him. Honest.
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: January 14th, 2009 09:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL, you're trying to avoid the attentions of the pitchfork brigade, aren't you? *grins* Great drabble.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 14th, 2009 09:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm starting to think that angry mobs will form up at the drop of a hat round here lately. Has someone started a side-business selling pitchforks and torches while I wasn't looking? *eyes Telperion_15 and Fifi suspiciously*
fififolle From: fififolle Date: January 14th, 2009 09:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
He saved the kids!! Huzzah! Wait. He saved... some of the kids. *shiver*
I'm sure he'll be fine, yeah...?
*wanders off in a slight daze*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 14th, 2009 09:48 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm sure he'll be fine, yeah...?

I'm sure he will be. See above comments to Luka. Honest. Pay no attention to the icon. *whistles innocently*
mysteriousaliwz From: mysteriousaliwz Date: January 14th, 2009 09:56 pm (UTC) (Link)
*squeaks*

Get that ambulance here, pronto!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 14th, 2009 10:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
There there, he'll be fine. Trust me, I'm a cretaceous era therapod. Would I hurt him? (okay, don't answer that)
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: January 14th, 2009 10:06 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, so we're killing him now, are we? *glares* Just because you have the icon, doesn't mean you have to live up to it! *glares more*

Also, *meep*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 14th, 2009 10:25 pm (UTC) (Link)
Well it's your fault for giving me the nickname in the first place!

Anyway, on this occasion I am entirely innocent. *whistles innocently and waits for Telperion to refresh her f-list*
bigtitch From: bigtitch Date: January 14th, 2009 10:25 pm (UTC) (Link)
*meep*
Connor! Nooo!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 14th, 2009 10:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
Honestly, people accuse me of having this reputation for death and maiming, and then look surprised when I actually do it! Can't win with some people.
reggietate From: reggietate Date: January 14th, 2009 11:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
*Meep* Poor, brave Connor...
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 15th, 2009 08:11 am (UTC) (Link)
they're all heroes. Some of them are just a bit more reckles than others.
cordeliadelayne From: cordeliadelayne Date: January 14th, 2009 11:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
Eek!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 15th, 2009 08:12 am (UTC) (Link)
*evil grin*
madscribbles From: madscribbles Date: January 15th, 2009 12:22 am (UTC) (Link)
I cheated and read the other one first. But, still, ow. *pouts*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 15th, 2009 08:13 am (UTC) (Link)
No fair, cheating! But there were demands for a fixit so this time there was a happy ending.
verito295 From: verito295 Date: January 15th, 2009 02:42 am (UTC) (Link)
Awwwwwwwwwww
*huggles them*
Lovely drabble, goes without saying that I hope Connor will be ok!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 15th, 2009 08:15 am (UTC) (Link)
I think Connor and Abby must end up saving each other on at least a weekly basis! But there's a fixit sequel, because otherwise there seemed to be a mob forming.
knitekat From: knitekat Date: August 6th, 2009 10:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
Meep. No!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: August 10th, 2009 06:45 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heehee! *evil grin*
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