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fanfic: Voyeur - athene
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fanfic: Voyeur

Title: Voyeur
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Characters: Abby, Connor/Ryan
Rating: 12             
Warnings: slash
Spoilers: none
Challenge: Kisses
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.

 

          The first time Abby saw them it was an accident. Now she can’t help standing by the window when she hears Ryan’s car pull up.

             When they kiss goodbye it seems pushy, demanding, needy, desperate. As if this kiss might be the last thing they do before the world ends.

            She had never imagined Connor could be so dominant. Or that Ryan would let him. She occasionally wonders if this translates into other aspects of their relationship as well.

            Abby tries to look innocent when Connor bounces up the stairs into the flat, smiling happily and still licking his lips.

 

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lukadreaming From: lukadreaming Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh err! Dominant!Connor and voyeur!Abby. Great drabble *g*.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks. I thought of this on the bus on the way to work this morning, and had been desperately hoping I cold post in time before the next challenge went up. But Cordelia was being super-speedy, but very nicely agreed to let me and Fred post drabbles after the deadline anyway. But then I only just made it before midnight after getting home late from D&D!
lukadreaming From: lukadreaming Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL, glad you posted it, as it's a really good drabble! Bus and train journeys are good for inspiration!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
And it's a good thing I never go anywhere without a pen and notebook - I wrote the first draft on the bus as well!
cordeliadelayne From: cordeliadelayne Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
I do solemnly swear from now on I will post new challenges after 11pm. *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heehee! Sorry for being late with this one. I did consider trying to post it from work in my lunchbreak, but didn't fancy my chances of not mucking it up if I was trying to post in a hurry.
reggietate From: reggietate Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh, that's a bit different! Very nice :-)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
I think Abby would *have* to watch, really. She'd be too curious not to.
reggietate From: reggietate Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, definitely, and then she'd feel a bit ashamed of it.
cordeliadelayne From: cordeliadelayne Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
Very nice!

Hee, Abby does seem to get cast as the voyeur a lot doesn't she? *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 23rd, 2008 11:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
Abby does seem to get cast as the voyeur a lot doesn't she?

Hmm, yes, poor Abby. I've only just noticed that both of my drabbles for this one involve Abby watching Connor kissing someone else. That wasn't entirey what I'd intended...
adafrog From: adafrog Date: September 24th, 2008 12:12 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh, very good.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 24th, 2008 07:06 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks
verito295 From: verito295 Date: September 24th, 2008 01:57 am (UTC) (Link)
Hmm yummy! Love the idea of a more dominant Connor and I bloody well don't blame Abby :D I'd be doing the same!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 24th, 2008 07:07 pm (UTC) (Link)
Mmmm... everyone needs a bit of dominant!Connor in their lives.
bigtitch From: bigtitch Date: September 24th, 2008 04:22 am (UTC) (Link)
Of course Abby would watch! Sensible girl!
And it's a hot image - dom!Connor. Lovely!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 24th, 2008 07:08 pm (UTC) (Link)
She'd be crazy not to watch, really. Esoecially if they insist on doing it where she can see like that *grin*
fififolle From: fififolle Date: September 24th, 2008 07:20 am (UTC) (Link)
Hee!!! OMG *luffs*
I just love this. There's now way you could resist sneaking a look at those two, LOL *headdesk*
Marvellous.
And I'm sure Connor has an imagination that could imagine an end of the world scenario every day, even if the LHC isn't operational ;)
Mmmmmmmmmmmmm. *goes to happy place*
Thank you!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 24th, 2008 07:09 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heehee, glad you liked. I couldn't resist sneaking one little Connor/Ryan fix in with that drabble challenge.
fififolle From: fififolle Date: September 24th, 2008 09:05 pm (UTC) (Link)
Absolutely :) I'm glad you squeezed it in in time!

Um, have you got any time in the next week to cast an eye over less than 300 words of Ryan/Connor at all? Just wondering, no worries.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 24th, 2008 09:33 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yep, no problem. Do you still have my e-mail address from when we were talking about Dan icons? Send the fic over and I'll probably squee at it, and then attempt to offer sensible comments *grin*
fififolle From: fififolle Date: September 24th, 2008 09:37 pm (UTC) (Link)
*still giggling from reading early oddegg Connor/Ryan fic*

Thanks! I've just sent it :)
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: September 24th, 2008 11:24 am (UTC) (Link)
Very nice! Wish I got the chance to watch these two.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 24th, 2008 07:09 pm (UTC) (Link)
It is rather an interesting visual place, isn't it.
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: September 24th, 2008 07:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh Abby, you naughty, naughty girl! Next time you must save me a seat! *g*

Gorgeous!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 24th, 2008 07:59 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heehee. I suspect that window would get quite crowded if we all tried to watch as well. And I suspect an orderly queue is out of the question with us lot...
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: September 24th, 2008 08:02 pm (UTC) (Link)
I suspect an orderly queue is out of the question with us lot...

LOL - more like a rugby scrum with lots of pushing and shoving!

Edited at 2008-09-24 08:02 pm (UTC)
knitekat From: knitekat Date: August 1st, 2009 09:52 pm (UTC) (Link)
Mmmm... DomConnor, watching and wondering Abby... mmmmmm
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: August 2nd, 2009 12:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
How could she possibly resist watching them? Besides, it doesn't sound like they were trying to be too subtle about it!
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