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fanfic: Motives - athene — LiveJournal
deinonychus_1
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fanfic: Motives
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telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: September 18th, 2008 07:04 pm (UTC) (Link)
‘Hey! Wow! Girlfriend!’

*sporfles*

Great drabble - tells you something important about all three characters involved.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 18th, 2008 07:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
I had to get a quick second opinion from Luka before I posted this, because I was worried that Abby might come across as being too cynical or bitchy. But Connor is just adorably oblivious *not sure whether to pet Connor, or slap him for being an idiot*

tells you something important about all three characters involved.

Oooh, thanks. That's a great comment.
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: September 18th, 2008 07:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
I was worried that Abby might come across as being too cynical or bitchy

Not at all! She comes across as someone who doesn't want to acknowledge what she knows in her heart. That kind of thing always makes people behave in ways that they might be a bit embarrassed/ashamed about later.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: September 18th, 2008 07:41 pm (UTC) (Link)
That's reassuring. I've been writing quite a bit from Abby pov recently, trying to get into her head, and I think I quite enjoy writing her now. She's certainly easier to write than Jenny.
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