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stealingpennies From: stealingpennies Date: February 14th, 2014 06:33 pm (UTC) (Link)

Lovely. Naturally D'Artagnan would try and fight five men at once! And come off worse. And Athos being all noble and protective. (Athos is actually my favourite, he's really very broken.)
You've really caught the characterisations beautifully in this.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: February 14th, 2014 08:36 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! Lol, of course D'Artagnan would try to fight five people, and then he would get all pouty and defensive when the other piled in, because rather than assuming that they jumped in because they wanted to help, he would assume they jumped in because they didn't trust him to cope on his own!

Glad you thought I'd got the characters right. It's always a bit nerve-wracking the first fic in a new fandom.
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