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Birthday fic for Nietie: Competitive

Happy birthday nietie! Hope you're having a lovely day.

Title: Competitive
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Pairing/characters: Ryan, Stephen/Becker
Rating: 18
Warnings: Wee bit of smut
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.
Word count: approx 950
Summary: Ryan knew he should have put a stop to this sooner.
AN: Written as a birthday fic for nietie. Sort of follows on from Testosterone

Ryan sat back in his chair and ran his fingers through his hair, his gaze still fixed on the now-frozen image on the laptop in front of him.

He wanted to say he couldn’t believe what he was seeing, but unfortunately that wasn’t the case.

He hit the play button again, and watched the amateur video footage (now confiscated) of the events at that day’s anomaly for the third time.

The creature incursion was already in full swing by the time the teenager had started to record it, and after the initial blur, the picture resolved itself to show a triceratops charging directly towards Stephen, with Becker in hot pursuit of the creature. Becker seemed to be yelling at Stephen to get out of the way, but instead Stephen crouched down, brought his tranquiliser rifle up, took aim, and fired. At the last second he rolled lightly out of the way as the dinosaur charged right through the place where he had been only moments earlier.

That was when Becker made a kamikaze sprint alongside the triceratops, yelling and waving his arms and generally making himself look like a target. It worked; the creature turned and lunged at him with its huge horns, and Becker barely got out of the way by leaping backwards onto an upturned tree trunk.

Between the two of them, they lured the creature to follow them towards the anomaly, each one diving in and causing a distraction when it got too close to the other. Eventually, when the anomaly came into view, Becker was being chased at full pelt by a very angry dinosaur.

Just as Stephen had moved at the last possibly second, Becker likewise waited until the final moment to drop and roll underneath the anomaly, bouncing into a light crouch with his shotgun up and ready to fire as the creature ran back through the anomaly to its own time.

The final straw was the cocky grin that Becker threw in Stephen’s direction as he stood up, just as the video footage came to an end.

Ryan shook his head. He had to admit it had been an impressive display of skill and heroics from both men, but at the same time this competitiveness between them was getting out of hand. Trying to outdo each other in the gym or on the firing range was one thing, but if they were showing off like that in the field then sooner or later someone was going to get hurt.

He got up and headed out into the main ARC area, and quickly ascertained that both Stephen and Becker had still been in the showers when everyone else had finished. Ryan rolled his eyes, and set off in that direction. They were probably trying to see who could get the best ‘sexy when wet’ hairstyle or something ridiculous like that, he thought.

Ryan knew he should he should have put a stop to this sooner, but it had seemed relatively harmless at first. A bit of competition never hurt anyone, and if it drove both of them to be better at their jobs then it was good for the team as well. But Ryan had noticed that recently it seemed to be more than just competitiveness. There was something more going on when they were in the gym, each trying to do more, faster than the other. Or all those sparring sessions, where their fights strayed a little over the edge of what was normal for simple training.

No, Ryan knew he had to put an end to this before one of them really did get hurt. He was uncomfortably aware that part of the reason why he hadn’t already done so was because he rather enjoyed watching their gym-related antics. Although Ryan was beginning to suspect that they were deliberately timing those in order to get the maximum number of spectators.

When he reached the locker room, he could hear the sounds of running water, and saw that both Stephen and Becker’s clothes were dumped on a bench. They were worse than women the amount of time they spent in the showers!

Ryan marched into the communal shower room and stopped dead.

For a moment he thought they were fighting, but it quickly became clear that wasn’t the case. Stephen had Becker shoved up against the wall and seemed to have his face pressed into Becker’s neck, while Becker’s head was thrown back, his eyes closed as the shower sprayed down onto them. There was a groan from one of them, Ryan couldn’t even tell which, and then he saw that Stephen’s hand was between them, holding both their cocks. He quickly tugged them both to a climax and then Stephen collapsed against Becker, leaning against him while they both got their breath back.

Becker reached out blindly, his eyes still closed, and felt around until he found the shower control, and he switched it off.

Ryan sidled slowly backwards out of the doorway, aware that as soon as Becker opened his eyes he was going to be seen. Before he was all the way out, Ryan heard Becker speak in a low voice.

“Promise me, next time you won’t leave it so long to get out of the way.”

Stephen chuckled. “I will if you will.”

Ryan ducked back into the changing room and breathed a quick sigh of relief.

Well, that explained a lot. He was still half tempted to give the cheeky bastards a talking to about their actions in the field today, though.

But first of all, he had to go to the men’s toilets and deal with a not so little problem of his own.

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lukadreaming From: lukadreaming Date: May 6th, 2012 06:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh err! Hot, wet and pretty boys! And I like long-suffering Ryan *g*.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 6th, 2012 08:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
I think Ryan has his hands full trying to keep those two in line!
nietie From: nietie Date: May 6th, 2012 06:36 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh, triple hotness!
Poor Ryan though. That is a lot of testosterone he has to deal with *huge grin*

Thank you for this wonderful birthday fic! *hugs*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 6th, 2012 08:14 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hee, they do seem to be making life difficult for Ryan, don't they?

Happy birthday! I hope you had a good day.
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: May 6th, 2012 06:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Mmm, that's industrial amounts of wet pretty!

Very hot. *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 6th, 2012 08:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
can't beat a bit of hot shower!porn occasionally!
clea2011 From: clea2011 Date: May 6th, 2012 07:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh that is a lot of very wet and yummy pretty! Nice! *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 6th, 2012 08:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks. I deffinitely rounded up all the pretty ones for this fic!
fififolle From: fififolle Date: May 6th, 2012 07:50 pm (UTC) (Link)
Bloody GUH! That was delicious!!!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 6th, 2012 08:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
hee, thanks. You can't really go wrong with that combination of pretty men.
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: May 6th, 2012 08:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, very nice! Ryan certainly got an eyeful there - lucky sod! *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 6th, 2012 08:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm not sure if the appropriate phrase should be poor Ryan for having to deal with the pair of them, or lucky Ryan for getting to watch!
bigtitch From: bigtitch Date: May 6th, 2012 08:19 pm (UTC) (Link)
Why does that never happen in my shower?

Hot fic!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 6th, 2012 08:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
Lol! Clearly you are not hanging out in the right shower blocks!
knitekat From: knitekat Date: May 6th, 2012 10:07 pm (UTC) (Link)
Poor long-suffering Ryan, although he did get a reward at the end ;) Lots of wet pretties to look at. *stands to watch for a while*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 7th, 2012 09:26 am (UTC) (Link)
I think we'd all have to stand and watch if we saw that going on!
kristen_mara From: kristen_mara Date: May 6th, 2012 11:12 pm (UTC) (Link)

Love how Ryan loved watching those two in the gym (and how they seemed to deliberately time it *G*), then Ryan having to delay lecturing them.

Very hot men with added wetness!

deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 7th, 2012 09:28 am (UTC) (Link)
I bet they deliberately time their gym sessions! They both like to show off far too much, and who could resist watching that much pretty getting all hot and sweaty?
freddiejoey From: freddiejoey Date: May 7th, 2012 01:03 am (UTC) (Link)
Smokin' and sizzling.....

deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 7th, 2012 09:29 am (UTC) (Link)
hee, thanks! Hot men ftw! :-)
natchris From: natchris Date: May 7th, 2012 01:38 am (UTC) (Link)
*Wibbles and wobbles in delight*

Edited at 2012-05-07 01:49 am (UTC)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 7th, 2012 09:29 am (UTC) (Link)
Heehee! Thanks.
flaccidduck From: flaccidduck Date: May 7th, 2012 02:38 am (UTC) (Link)
Hot stuff baby!

deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 7th, 2012 09:30 am (UTC) (Link)
hee, thanks. That was a lot of hotness in one place!
joshinator From: joshinator Date: May 7th, 2012 03:10 am (UTC) (Link)
i'd compete for this any day....

deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 7th, 2012 09:31 am (UTC) (Link)
lol, thanks. It would be worth watching them.
celeste9 From: celeste9 Date: May 7th, 2012 03:57 am (UTC) (Link)
LOL, poor Ryan! The things he has to deal with. :) I always feel cheated we didn't get Stephen and Becker on the show at once because aside from the pretty, they so would be constantly trying to one-up each other. Great hot, funny fic!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 7th, 2012 09:32 am (UTC) (Link)
I think Ryan has got his long-suffering expression down to an art form dealing with these two! There are definite fringe benefits, though, even if he does have to tell them off occasionally!
cordeliadelayne From: cordeliadelayne Date: May 7th, 2012 08:14 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh, very nice image! Ryan should have asked to join them *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 8th, 2012 05:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
He should have. Knowing those two, they would probably have said yes! :-)
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