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ficlet: Training

I'd just like to say, I cannot believe this is the first fic that I wrote in 2012! A certain Hound is clearly a Very Bad Influence making me write things like this!

Title: Training
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Pairing/characters: Ryan/Becker
Rating: 18
Warnings: Slave!fic, pissing
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.
Word count: approx 675
Summary: Ryan’s new slave has a lot to learn
AN: Reposting from fredbassett’s fandom_stocking.




“Well, soldier. What have you got to say for yourself?”

Becker remained silent under Ryan’s glare. They both knew that any attempt at apology would only make things worse at this point.

Ryan slowly circled around the other man. Becker remained motionless, kneeling, his head bowed, naked save for his collar. He barely even flinched when Ryan ran the coil of the whip over the red lines already scored deeply into the younger man’s back.

“You disobeyed me. Again.

They both knew that Becker’s actions had been a response to Cutter going off on one of his hunches again, and getting himself into trouble. They both knew that Becker had probably saved the man’s life. But at the same time, Becker had acted without thinking, and without respecting the chain of command. In short, he had made the mistake of forgetting that he wore a collar now.

This was only his second week, after all.

But that wasn’t the point. He had disobeyed a direct order.

Ryan leaned close and whispered in Becker’s ear. “I do not accept disobedience, soldier.”

“No, Master.”

Even now Ryan could hear the edge to Becker’s voice. The pride. The wilfulness. The refusal to submit completely. Any other master might simply have tried to beat that out of him, but Ryan already knew that wasn’t going to work with Becker.

But he also knew there was more than one way to skin a cat.

Ryan stopped, standing at Becker’s side. He saw the other man’s shoulders tense minutely, as if expecting the whip again. Ryan let him think that for several moments, before he slung the coiled whip over his shoulder. Then he unzipped his trousers and slipped his cock out. The two glasses of water he had drunk before he began to discipline his slave had done their work now.

The stream of hot urine splashed onto Becker’s shoulder and back, and this time he did flinch when it hit the raw wounds.

“Up straight,” Ryan barked. “Hands behind your back.”

Becker complied immediately, his hands linking behind his back and his head coming up. The movement ensured that the rest of Ryan’s piss landed on his front, soaking this chest hair and trickling down the expanse of his chest and abdomen. At the last moment, Ryan directed the stream upwards to hit Becker’s face and hair.

Finally done, he moved to stand in front of his slave.

“Clean it,” he ordered.

Becker leaned forwards, his hands still behind his back, and took Ryan’s cock into his mouth, sucking and licking away the last of his piss, his expression carefully controlled to hide his distaste.

He was learning, at least, Ryan reflected.

Finally satisfied, Ryan pulled his cock out and put it away, watching Becker as he zipped his trousers back up. He waited until he knew the urine would be cooling unpleasantly on his skin, until he would be becoming uncomfortable from maintaining that position for so long. And then he waited a little longer, to make sure the lesson has sunk in.

“You have a lot to learn, soldier. But that’s all right. I am a good teacher.”

“Yes, Master.”

Becker’s eyes were still downcast, and this time at least he kept a better control of his voice.

“Go to my room,” Ryan ordered. “Take out the short chain manacles and the cock ring, and lay them on the bed. Then wait for me.”

“Yes, Master.”

Becker stood, his hands still linked at his back. Definitely learning, Ryan thought with approval. Before Becker could move, though, Ryan reached out and tapped him with the whip.

“And don’t even think about cleaning yourself up.”

Becker hesitated for the briefest of moments, and Ryan saw him tense again. Then Becker nodded.

“As you wish, Master.”

Ryan watched him leave, waiting until the other man had gone before he let the satisfied smile creep onto his face. Everyone had a weakness, and now he knew what Becker’s was.

He was going to enjoy training his new slave a great deal.




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telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: January 12th, 2012 10:02 pm (UTC) (Link)
I love that we both wrote Fred slave fic with the same title! *g*

And this was worryingly hot... ;)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 12th, 2012 10:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
I know, when the stockings were revealed and I saw the title of your ficlet I spent several minutes giggling. Brain share!

Hee, thanks. I normally don't go near slave fic, and certainly not pissing! Oh well, there's a first time for everything, and it's probably a slippery slide downhill from here!
knitekat From: knitekat Date: January 12th, 2012 10:10 pm (UTC) (Link)
Do we get to see more training? ;)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 12th, 2012 10:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
Let's just say I'm not ruling it out... *evil grin*
knitekat From: knitekat Date: January 12th, 2012 10:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
*yells, oh look, it's Connor and throws bunnies in when D_1 isn't watching ;)*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 12th, 2012 10:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
*staggers around looking slightly dazed after being hit on head with flying bunny*
knitekat From: knitekat Date: January 12th, 2012 10:19 pm (UTC) (Link)
*oops, it wasn't meant to hit you... unless it has sparked fic, in which case ;)*
talliw From: talliw Date: January 12th, 2012 10:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
Becker certainly won't forget this lesson.:)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 12th, 2012 10:19 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm sure he won't, but I bet it takes more than just this to completely get rid of that stubborn streak in him.
tay_21 From: tay_21 Date: January 12th, 2012 10:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
OH HELLS YEAH! That was effing hot! I LOVED reading that. You sooo need to write more in this. WANT! WANT! WANT! *Feeds bunnies with miracle grow carrots*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 12th, 2012 10:37 pm (UTC) (Link)
lol! You're as bad as Fred when it comes to being enthusiastic about slave fic and pissing and general bondage and nastiness! :-)

(And it has occured to me that a couple of your filth smut prompts might fit very nicely into this ficverse *evil grin*)

Edited at 2012-01-12 10:43 pm (UTC)
tay_21 From: tay_21 Date: January 12th, 2012 10:51 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL! I just like the humiliation. LOL! I don't actually care about pissing. That's Fred's kink not mine. HEE! I DO totally LOOOOOVE the nastiness though and the slave part of it and the bondage. LOL!. I'm an odd duck. *nods* Or, as Fred would say, a sick puppy. Hehehehehe

(OH! YES PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! *pouts* Other than Fred, no one has claimed mine. :-( I thought they were good prompts, lol.)
freddiejoey From: freddiejoey Date: January 13th, 2012 12:07 am (UTC) (Link)
This is seriously smokiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 13th, 2012 09:34 am (UTC) (Link)
thanks, Becker makes a worryingly good (and pretty) slave.
nietie From: nietie Date: January 13th, 2012 01:10 pm (UTC) (Link)
OMG! I enjoy him training his new slave a great deal too! Guh!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 13th, 2012 05:20 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks, Becker makes a very pretty slave, I'm sure Ryan is going to have lots of fun work to do with him until he learns how to behave properly.
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: January 13th, 2012 01:37 pm (UTC) (Link)
Mmmm, I think my friends know me all to well!!

This is absolutely smoking hot, and I'd love to see more in thsi universe. *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 13th, 2012 05:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
Lol, it really was quite impressive how much brainshare there was on the subject of slave fic and/or pissing in your stocking!

I enjoyed writing this a worrying amount, so there may well be more at some point in the future.
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: January 13th, 2012 05:49 pm (UTC) (Link)
Pissing seems to have caught on in a big way!!
jaynedoll From: jaynedoll Date: January 13th, 2012 05:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
OOooh yes, more slavefic. And pissing. With Becker. It's all good *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 14th, 2012 03:06 pm (UTC) (Link)
hee, thanks. Becker is far too pretty on his knees. Fred is definitely a bad influence!
fififolle From: fififolle Date: January 13th, 2012 08:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
Rrrrr fabulous!! I love the way Becker is *still* trying to keep control. Oh yes, Ryan will have fun training him :D
What a great start to your writing year!! *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 14th, 2012 03:08 pm (UTC) (Link)
I suspect Ryan has a full time job on his hands training his new slave. Which ought to be entertaining for the rest of us, at least *evil grin*
aunteeneenah From: aunteeneenah Date: May 23rd, 2013 09:56 pm (UTC) (Link)
I decided if I was going to read the third installment, I'd better read the first two. Oh, Becker, what have you gotten yourself into now. Poor Lamb. **huggles him from a distance as he is, after all, still covered in drying piss** *g*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 23rd, 2013 10:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
This one you could possibly have skipped, but you do probably have to read the second one to understand the latest one, I'm afraid. Poor Becker, you'll find out how he ended up in that position in the next one, but it is not a nice story... *evil grin*

He could definitely do with a hug, poor thing.
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