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Fanfic: Breaking Captain Ryan - athene
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Fanfic: Breaking Captain Ryan


Title: Breaking Captain Ryan
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Pairing/characters: Ryan/Evil!Ryan (Ryan/Connor implied)
Rating: 18
Warnings: Non-con, violence, bondage, cross dressing (implied).
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.
Word count: approx 900
Summary: Trapped in an alternate timeline, Ryan faces his most dangerous enemy.
AN: This is Fred’s fault. The pairing and prompts were Ryan, Ryan, and cross dressing. There’s cross dressing in there somewhere. Maybe. If you squint a bit.


Ryan heard the door open and felt himself tense. He heard footsteps enter the room, pause, and the door close again. He heard the sound of something being dropped to the floor, and then the footsteps came closer. He was still tied facedown on the bed, and couldn’t see who it was yet, but he was convinced it was just one person this time. Unlike the last time. And the time before that.

“Comfortable, Captain?”

Oh, fuck. It was him.

Suddenly there was hot breath right by his ear.

“I asked you a fucking question, captain.

Ryan turned his head enough to look into the hard blue eyes that were inches away from him, and stared right back at his doppelganger.

The other Ryan smirked and stood back, and Ryan made a point of looking him up and down, taking in the black leather trousers, the tight black t-shirt, and the whip curled in loops around his hand.

“Which bad porn film did you just walk off the set of?” Ryan quipped. He had no intention of giving his double the satisfaction of seeing him sweat, or grovel, or even flinch.

“That might be a more convincing show of bravado if you weren’t naked and tied down and had just been used as a fuck toy by every single man in my squad.”

“What do you want?” Ryan asked. If his double was working up to another torture session, he wished the bastard would just get the hell on with it and quit with the gloating.

The other Ryan crouched down beside him so he was on eye level.

“If Connor could see you now, what would he think? We’ve got him as well, you know. He still thinks that you’re going to orchestrate some amazing escape and rescue. He won’t give us what we want as long as he believes that you’re going to be the big hero.”

Ryan refused to react to the mention of Connor. He refused to let himself imagine what these bastards had done to his lover, or what Connor had thought when he saw this alternate version of Ryan. Unless... what if there was an alternate Connor as well? What if this entire fucking world was inhabited by fucked up versions of everyone he knew?

His attention was snapped back when the other Ryan stood up and moved round behind him again. He heard the sound of the whip unfurling, and tried to force himself to stay calm, quiet.

Without warning, something hard shoved into his arse, and Ryan bit back a gasp of pain. He felt drag and burn as the hard edges of the whip handle was forced further and further in.

“I know what you’re thinking, Ryan,” his double said. “I know because I am you, so I know what I’d be thinking if I was in your place. You don’t want to give me anything. You want to make me push and push until I either make a mistake and give you an opening, or until I kill you.”

The handle was dragged out of him, and then shoved back in hard, fast. Ryan felt tearing, and squeezed his eyes closed.

He felt hot breath on the back of his neck.

“I’m not going to kill you,” the other Ryan whispered. “That would be too easy. That wouldn’t get Connor to co-operate.”

The handle twisted inside him, its movement eased by the sudden hot slickness.

“I know what you fear, because I am you. I know what it takes to break you. And that’s what I’m going to do, Ryan. I’m going to break you, and I’m going to make sure that Connor is there to see it. I want to see the look in his eyes when he realises that you aren’t going to rescue him this time. That you’re not the hero. That you’re nothing. Humiliated. Broken.”

Ryan felt the first real fear curling within him, even as the whip handle was dragged out again.

“I brought you something, Ryan. Don’t you want to look at your present?”

Ryan felt a hand on the back of his neck, and his head was forcibly twisted to the side so he was looking into the room. It took him a moment to work out what he was seeing. Then his eyes widened a fraction as he recognised the leather cuffs and manacles. And the corset. A black leather corset, the back laced with pink ribbons and leather straps. The thick leather collar with a long chain attached to the corset.

“You’re going to be wearing that when I take you to see Connor. You’re going to crawl on your hands and knees and he is going to watch while you suck off every one of my men in turn. While they all use you over and over until you beg them to stop.”

The other Ryan slipped his hand further round and squeezed Ryan’s throat just enough to make his head start to spin.

“Connor is going to watch you break, and I am going to make sure that you are looking into his eyes at the moment when he loses faith in you.”

He leaned close again, and Ryan fought to stay conscious.

“And when I’m finished with you, then I get to start on Connor.”

Over my dead body, was Ryan’s last thought as the darkness took him.


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jooles34 From: jooles34 Date: November 12th, 2011 06:29 pm (UTC) (Link)
Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeep
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
*insert evil maniacal laugh here*
bigtitch From: bigtitch Date: November 12th, 2011 06:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
*covers ears* Thanks, I think! :-)
nietie From: nietie Date: November 12th, 2011 06:48 pm (UTC) (Link)
OMG! OMG! OMG!
Brilliant use of the pairing and prompt.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
hee, thanks *evil grin*
jaynedoll From: jaynedoll Date: November 12th, 2011 07:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
OMG! Darker than the darkest thing & I do love a bit of evil doppelganger action.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
When I got the same name twice there really had to be evil alternate timeline Ryan. Which, naturally, led to non-con... *evil grin*
fififolle From: fififolle Date: November 12th, 2011 09:20 pm (UTC) (Link)
Bloody hell! That is so evil!! I want to crawl into a corner and cry for him :( Don't suppose you'd care to fix this? I rather like having evil!clone!Ryan around :D
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
heehee! Poor Ryan, maybe Connor can do the rescuing this time?
fififolle From: fififolle Date: November 13th, 2011 01:52 pm (UTC) (Link)
We know he's got it in him!! I'm perfectly happy with that trope :D
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: November 12th, 2011 09:39 pm (UTC) (Link)
Meep! However, also RAWR! ;)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
*evil laugh* I broked Ryan... bad me. Maybe... :-)
kerry_louise From: kerry_louise Date: November 12th, 2011 09:41 pm (UTC) (Link)
EEP! Ebil!Ryan
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
Evil!Ryan is very evil.
mysteriousaliwz From: mysteriousaliwz Date: November 12th, 2011 10:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
Noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
*hides behind sofa*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:25 pm (UTC) (Link)
*evil laugh of evilness* What else was I supposed to do with the pairing Ryan/Ryan?
knitekat From: knitekat Date: November 12th, 2011 11:08 pm (UTC) (Link)
Meeeep. Evil!Ryan is um, good. More?
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:26 pm (UTC) (Link)
Evil!Ryan cetainly has interesting taste in clothes and accessories *evil grin*
tay_21 From: tay_21 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh bloody hell that was effing fantastic. When can we read the rest???? *Iz cheeky and demanding*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:29 pm (UTC) (Link)
*evil laugh* Honestly, woman! is absolutely not pondering what Evil!Connor might be doing while this is going on, or what might happen if Evil!Ryan and Evil!Connor team up to torment our Ryan and/or Connor...
tay_21 From: tay_21 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:33 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL! You could totally make a little fic series out of this. I'd freaking jump at the chance to read that. :-D Also, can you fix it and make it better with a happy ending. :-) Pretty please with chocolate Connors and Ryans on top? *bats eyelashes*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
lol, you make me laugh (in a good way). You're demanding evil hurt fic, *and* a happy ending!
tay_21 From: tay_21 Date: November 12th, 2011 11:45 pm (UTC) (Link)
Um... YES! *Iz completely unashamed* :-D
freddiejoey From: freddiejoey Date: November 13th, 2011 02:22 am (UTC) (Link)
Wonderfully evil!

And wonderfully hot!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 13th, 2011 12:25 pm (UTC) (Link)
lol, yep, that was the general idea *evil grin*. Thanks. glad you liked.
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: November 13th, 2011 11:42 am (UTC) (Link)
Ooooh bloody hell that's wrong and hot and HOT!!!

Evil!alternate Ryan is very yummy indeed.

(*whispers* and there was added bonus fucking with a with a handle!)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 13th, 2011 12:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
lol, thought you'd like Evil!Ryan abusing our Ryan.
lsellersfic From: lsellersfic Date: November 13th, 2011 12:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
Meep!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 13th, 2011 12:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
*evil laugh*
talliw From: talliw Date: November 19th, 2011 11:32 am (UTC) (Link)
Ugh, that was so evil. I hope our Ryan will find a way out of this hellhole.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: November 20th, 2011 09:16 am (UTC) (Link)
Evil!Ryan is having fun trying to break our Ryan. They might escape... eventually.
clea2011 From: clea2011 Date: February 29th, 2012 07:41 pm (UTC) (Link)
OMG how did I miss this one?!
Erm, I mean meep, poor Ryan.
And of course poor Connor too! Um... is there any more? :-)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: February 29th, 2012 07:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Lol! I do love the way the Denial gang squee about nasty non-con and general all-purpose evilness!

I didn't end up writing any more of this, unfortunately (or possibly fortunately, depending on your viewpoint!), so you'll just have to imagine what Dark!Connor might be doing while this is happening.
clea2011 From: clea2011 Date: February 29th, 2012 08:04 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh no, I was just... um admiring the pretty pink ribbons on the corset. Yes.
Okay... I can do that :-)
aunteeneenah From: aunteeneenah Date: January 1st, 2014 03:50 am (UTC) (Link)
Don't know how I've missed this (although, on some level, I kind of wish I had... missed it) Have you ever considered finishing this? For one thing, I think evil!Ryan has no idea how Connor would react especially since he loves Ryan. He'd never lose his faith in Ryan or stop loving him. Evil!Ryan isn't capable of understanding that kind of devotion.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 1st, 2014 11:28 am (UTC) (Link)
*evil laugh* You know, I'd almost forgotten about this fic, it was ages ago! I have absolutely no plans to write any more of this, but yeah, it's going to take a lot more than that to break Connor's faith in Ryan. And I think maybe this time Connor might the one who does the rescuing.
aunteeneenah From: aunteeneenah Date: January 1st, 2014 04:28 pm (UTC) (Link)
That sounds like a muse is whispering in your ear. I shall wait in anticipation.
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