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ficlet: Timing is Everthing - athene
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ficlet: Timing is Everthing

Another one from the drabble/ficlet prompts, this one for telperion_15 . Since she insisted on giving us fade to black this week, I thought there ought to be some N/C smut.

Title: Timing is Everything
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Characters: Nick/Connor, Jenny
Rating: 18                    
Warnings: smut
Spoilers: none
Word count: 200
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.
AN: written for telperion_15 with the prompt ‘phone call’.

  

          “Nick, please.”

            Connor squirmed under him, possibly just in case Nick hadn’t got the point already.

            “Patience,” Nick murmured as he slowly buried himself deep within his lover, intent on drawing out every sensation for as long as possible, no matter how much Connor begged. He was determined to teach Connor that hard and fast wasn’t the only way. Even so, Nick knew he was close now. They both were. He could feel it building as he began to pull out again, so close-

            His phone rang. Two seconds later, so did Connor’s.

            Nick froze, then reached for the phone.

            “Ignore it,” Connor whimpered, writhing again.

            “Can’t. It’ll be an anomaly.”

            “If it’s anything less interesting than a T-rex I may kill someone,” Connor muttered. 

            “What?” Nick barked into the phone. “It’s nearly midnight, this’d better be goo-”

            It was at that moment that Connor thrust backwards, impaling himself on Nick’s cock and forcing an involuntary moan of shock and intense pleasure from him.

            “Nick? Are you okay?” Jenny asked on the other end of the phone.

            “Cramp,” Nick gasped, trying desperately to ignore his impending orgasm.

            When Connor did that a second time, Nick’s phone call got rather more interesting.



 


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lukadreaming From: lukadreaming Date: April 18th, 2010 08:02 pm (UTC) (Link)
ROFL! I'd love to have seen Jenny's face!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 08:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
I suspect Jenny may not be able to keep a straight face when she sees him.
textualdeviance From: textualdeviance Date: April 18th, 2010 08:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ahhh! So nice. Love it!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 08:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
hee, thanks.
kerry_louise From: kerry_louise Date: April 18th, 2010 08:38 pm (UTC) (Link)
LMAO. Oh yeah... a cramp, cause you know, thats believeable, hehe!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 08:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
hee, I don't think Nick's brain is quite capable of coming up with anything better right at that moment.
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: April 18th, 2010 08:39 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh you are an evil woman!

Although, you know...

GUH

*reads again*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 09:03 pm (UTC) (Link)
evil? Moi? *innocent eyes*

It was either this or phone sex, and somehow I couldn't see the boys getting up to that kind of thing *grin*
ebonyfeather From: ebonyfeather Date: April 18th, 2010 08:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
Cramp- yeah, right!

Fab.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 09:09 pm (UTC) (Link)
hee! Oops, poor Nick.
canadian_jay From: canadian_jay Date: April 18th, 2010 08:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
OH OW. MY NOSE. MY NOSE.

*snorted a little hard*

Great stuff.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 09:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
oops, sorry. *giggle*
reggietate From: reggietate Date: April 18th, 2010 08:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hee! I like! Love to hear the conversation with Jenny explaining it afterwards :-)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 09:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
I think Jenny is going to be doing a lot of smirking and making several knowing comments when the boys finally arrive at the anomaly site.
knitekat From: knitekat Date: April 18th, 2010 09:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL I bet the phone call got more interesting. The meeting of the boys and Jenny at the anomaly site would be interesting *eg*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 09:38 pm (UTC) (Link)
I suspect Jenny is going to get a lot of mileage out of this one *grin*
jaynedoll From: jaynedoll Date: April 18th, 2010 09:48 pm (UTC) (Link)
I can totally picture Jenny's knowing smirk next time she sees the boys and Connor/Nick squirming.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 09:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Connor was quite naughty, really, but in his defense, Nick probably should have waited another thirty seconds before he answered the phone.
mysteriousaliwz From: mysteriousaliwz Date: April 18th, 2010 09:51 pm (UTC) (Link)
I want cramp that sounds that good!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 18th, 2010 09:55 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL! Poor Nick is having excuse!fail. I suspect Connor might be in a wee bit of trouble once Nick can string a coherent sentence together again.
bella_farfalla From: bella_farfalla Date: April 18th, 2010 10:28 pm (UTC) (Link)
BWAHAHAHA!! Jenny a saucy minx, she blatently knows what's really happening, that's why she's still on the phone... lol
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 19th, 2010 07:20 am (UTC) (Link)
LOL, yeah. And I can't blame her, you'd have to listen, wouldn't you? And then spend the entire rest of the night making Nick blush.
fififolle From: fififolle Date: April 18th, 2010 10:45 pm (UTC) (Link)
*sporfle*
Oh Connor!
*fansself madly*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 19th, 2010 07:23 am (UTC) (Link)
Hee, apparently Connor *really* doesn't like being interupted. I suspect Nick will be having pointed words later.

Edited at 2010-04-19 07:24 am (UTC)
From: sallycandance Date: April 19th, 2010 04:13 am (UTC) (Link)
Mwahahaha!! Go Connor *snorts*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 19th, 2010 07:23 am (UTC) (Link)
Nick really should have waited before he answered that phone.
echo_fangirl From: echo_fangirl Date: April 19th, 2010 09:02 am (UTC) (Link)
Sporfle! I rather suspect Nick should have let Connor finish before answering the phone!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 19th, 2010 12:03 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yep, that might have been the less embarrassing option with hindsight.
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: April 19th, 2010 10:34 am (UTC) (Link)
Cramp, my arse! *g* Nice one :)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: April 19th, 2010 12:04 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hee! Poor Nick, Jenny is never going to let him forget this.
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