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fanfic: Appetite

for the Primeval 100 challenge 88 - hunger

Title: Appetite
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Characters: Abby/Connor
Rating: 12             
Warnings: het
Spoilers: none
Challenge: Hunger
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.

 

“I see the latest near death experience hasn’t affected your appetite,” Abby commented as Connor devoured the takeaway.

“The adrenaline rush makes me hungry,” he protested around a mouthful of pizza. Then he smiled, oblivious to the tomato sauce smeared across his cheek.

            Abby rolled her eyes and wondered again why she loved this idiot.

She sidled over and sat on his lap, straddling his legs. Abby always enjoyed his surprised expression, no matter how many times she did this.

            Connor wasn’t the only one with an appetite tonight. The difference was, Abby’s wasn’t going to be satisfied by pizza.

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lukadreaming From: lukadreaming Date: January 9th, 2009 07:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL! Lovely image of Connor scoffing the pizza *g*.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 07:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heehee, I liked that metal image of the tomato sauce on his cheek. Maybe Abby will lick it off for him, but I ran out of word count!
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: January 9th, 2009 07:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
Nice :)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 07:28 pm (UTC) (Link)
This was another stubborn bugger that didn't want to be 100 words.
fififolle From: fififolle Date: January 9th, 2009 07:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heeeee! I love the way she has that effect on him *g* and it's nice to see them happy with pizza... and with the promise of dessert ;)
Thank you!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 07:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm sure even if Abby and Connor ever got together he'd still be perpetually surprised whenever she jumped him *grin* Although once he's got over the surprise he'll probably enjoy the dessert far more than he enjoyed the pizza.
reggietate From: reggietate Date: January 9th, 2009 07:29 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oooh, het! Yummy :-)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 07:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
I wanted to write more Connor/Abby this year, so thought I'd better make a start.
alyse From: alyse Date: January 9th, 2009 07:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, yay! Yummy-licious ::g::
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 07:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
I love writing Abby and Connor, they're such fun sometimes. Especially in little scenes like this.
madscribbles From: madscribbles Date: January 9th, 2009 07:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hmm... pizza. And Connor for desert. Yummy!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 07:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
who could resist such a tempting menu?
missyvortexdv From: missyvortexdv Date: January 9th, 2009 07:42 pm (UTC) (Link)
:D
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 07:50 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks
cordeliadelayne From: cordeliadelayne Date: January 9th, 2009 09:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh, very nice :D
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 09:49 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks. Connor/Abby is just so cute sometimes.
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: January 9th, 2009 09:40 pm (UTC) (Link)
This is gorgeous! I love adorably!confused!Connor... *g*

And can I just say how amused I am that you felt it necessary to warn for het! It's like you think we're all confirmed slashers or something... ;)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 09:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Adorably!confused!Connor is such fun, I'm sure Abby surprises him on purpose.

It's like you think we're all confirmed slashers or something... ;)

I can't imagine what might have given me that idea! Besides, since I always include 'slash' in the warnings, it would be terribly un-pc of me not to give equal opportunities to warnings about het.
bigtitch From: bigtitch Date: January 9th, 2009 10:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh dear. I hope Connor hasn't bitten off more than he can chew! ;)
Great fic!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 10:38 pm (UTC) (Link)
heehee, it's probably a good thing he ate all that pizza; he'll need to keep his strength up for the rest of the evening's activities *smirk*
mysteriousaliwz From: mysteriousaliwz Date: January 9th, 2009 10:39 pm (UTC) (Link)
*licks*

I can really see Connor being agreeably surprised every time Abby pounces. Nice :)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 9th, 2009 10:56 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm sure he would be surprised. But he probably catches up fairly quickly *grin*
adafrog From: adafrog Date: January 10th, 2009 12:30 am (UTC) (Link)
Cute, thanks.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 10th, 2009 10:24 am (UTC) (Link)
thanks
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deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 31st, 2009 08:43 am (UTC) (Link)
thanks, glad you liked. Who can resist Connor when he's all surprised like that?
chellefic From: chellefic Date: January 31st, 2009 08:05 pm (UTC) (Link)
She sidled over and sat on his lap, straddling his legs. Abby always enjoyed his surprised expression, no matter how many times she did this.

Those lines say a great deal about both of them.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: January 31st, 2009 08:40 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks. I suspect Connor is so used to not getting the girl that it would take him a while to adjust to the idea if he ever *did* really end up with Abby. And I can so see Abby being amused by this.
knitekat From: knitekat Date: August 2nd, 2009 09:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
Lovely fic. I don't think anything would stop Connor eating pizza... except for Abby (g)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: August 3rd, 2009 07:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
pizza or Abby... pizza or Abby... I think Connor would want *both*!
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