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Fanfic: Birthday Girl - athene
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Fanfic: Birthday Girl


Title: Birthday Girl
Author: Athene
Fandom: Primeval
Pairing/characters: Jess/Becker
Rating: 18
Warnings: Implied smut, fade to black.
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Not mine. ITV and Impossible Pictures own them.
Word count: approx 400
Summary: Becker has something special planned for the birthday girl.
AN: Written as a (slightly late) birthday fic for cordeliadelayne.




Jess wriggled in anticipation. She could hear Becker moving around the room behind her, but he had told her to lie face down on the bed, and she couldn’t see what he was up to.

“Keep still,” Becker said, a smile in his voice.

“Hurry up, then. It’s not nice to keep a girl waiting. Especially on her birthday.”

Jess felt the bed dip next to her, and heard him chuckle.

“Well, if you put it like that...”

Something cold landed in the small of her back, and Jess squealed.

“Relax,” Becker said, as his warm hands began to gently rub over the spot, spreading what she assumed must be some sort of massage oil onto her skin.

“You could have given me some warning,” Jess muttered.

“I could stop if you don’t like it...”

“Don’t you dare.”

Becker chucked again, and then he went to work in earnest.

His hands explored her back and shoulders and neck, gently at first, making sure that every inch of her received some attention. Jess closed her eyes and became pliant under his touch, occasionally murmuring sounds of approval.

Jess lost track of time, content to simply lie there, until Becker’s hands came to rest on her shoulders. She knew the muscles there were tight after all the hours spent at a computer every day, and apparently Becker knew it as well. His thumbs began to knead the knots, gently at first but gradually becoming more forceful. Jess moaned softly, the tension draining away as she melted into a relaxed, contented puddle beneath his skilful hands.

Becker leaned down and placed a soft kiss on her shoulder.

“Better?”

“Mmmmmmm,” Jess smiled, her eyes still closed.

“Good.”

She felt a soft towel being wrapped around her and the oil being rubbed away, but she remained still, too lethargic to assist.

Eventually, Becker lay down next to her, and she felt him stroking her hair.

“Hey, you can’t go sleep yet.”

Jess cracked an eye open and finally looked at him.

“I’m pretty sure I can.”

Becker snuggled closer, and his fingers began to trace a path down her spine, reawakening the over-sensitised skin.

“Are you quite sure?” he asked, his expression amused, but his eyes holding a promise that sent a thrill of anticipation through her. “It’s still your birthday for another three hours, and I intend to make sure you enjoy every single minute of it.”




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fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: May 21st, 2012 10:37 am (UTC) (Link)
Sweet :)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 12:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks.
nietie From: nietie Date: May 21st, 2012 12:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
Mmmm, lovely. Jess is a very lucky girl.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 12:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
She is! I think we all want Becker for our birthdays!
clea2011 From: clea2011 Date: May 21st, 2012 12:33 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oooh very nice! And I'm sure she'll manage to stay awake a bit longer, given the incentive! :-)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 12:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yes, with a promise like that I'm sure she'll stay awake for him.
freddiejoey From: freddiejoey Date: May 21st, 2012 01:45 pm (UTC) (Link)
Perfectly sweet! Becker/Jess is close to my favourite pairing
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 05:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks. They are adorable together.
flaccidduck From: flaccidduck Date: May 21st, 2012 02:00 pm (UTC) (Link)
Love this to bits
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 05:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks!
judithjohn From: judithjohn Date: May 21st, 2012 02:42 pm (UTC) (Link)
Delicious as chocolate.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 05:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks! Glad you liked it.
natchris From: natchris Date: May 21st, 2012 02:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
Lovely!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 05:23 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks!
joshinator From: joshinator Date: May 21st, 2012 02:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'll fade to black with Becker any day.

Nice!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 05:25 pm (UTC) (Link)
lol, I suspect we all would!
From: desert_jess Date: May 21st, 2012 02:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
Lucky Jess! Very sweet. Thanks for sharing :)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 05:25 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks, glad you liked it.
fififolle From: fififolle Date: May 21st, 2012 03:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
Mmmmmmm. I may have dribbled a little there. nomnomnom
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 05:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oops! *passes box of tissues* Why can't we all have Becker!massages? *pout*
celeste9 From: celeste9 Date: May 21st, 2012 05:37 pm (UTC) (Link)
So cute! Jess is an incredibly lucky girl! I'd love to have a Becker for my birthday...
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 06:38 pm (UTC) (Link)
I think we'd *all* like to have Becker for our birthdays!
reggietate From: reggietate Date: May 21st, 2012 05:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
Lucky Jess! I bet she enjoyed those three hours :-)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 06:39 pm (UTC) (Link)
I bet she did as well!
sandyleepotts From: sandyleepotts Date: May 21st, 2012 06:00 pm (UTC) (Link)
Jess is a very lucky girl.

Will there be more?
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 21st, 2012 06:40 pm (UTC) (Link)
thanks. No plans for moe at the moment, I'm afraid. Although there will undoubtedly be more J/B generally, just not more of this scenario.
cordeliadelayne From: cordeliadelayne Date: May 24th, 2012 08:50 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh, yay, thank you! This is lovely. If only I had my own Becker on hand!
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 24th, 2012 08:59 pm (UTC) (Link)
glad you liked it. I think we all want Becker to be our personal masseur.

Hope you had a great birthday.
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: May 24th, 2012 08:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ooh, very nice! :)

(And I've just realised I've totally failed to read any of your posts from this week, so I've got them all lined up now! *headdesk*
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 24th, 2012 09:00 pm (UTC) (Link)
hee, thanks.

I did think you'd gone a bit quiet this week. I was starting to wonder if your social life had suddenly gone berserk, or something!
telperion_15 From: telperion_15 Date: May 24th, 2012 09:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
I was only out on Monday night, but for some reason that's thrown me all out of whack! There have been other things that's I've suddenly realised I haven't read, and have had to go back to too!
dreamer_98 From: dreamer_98 Date: May 26th, 2012 03:51 am (UTC) (Link)
Sweet and sensuous. Jess is a lucky girl. :)
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: May 27th, 2012 08:26 am (UTC) (Link)
thanks. Yes, she definitely is a lucky girl!
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